Hi!  Hoping tat you could look over my Types of Rocks pages.  Any positive feedback, as allways will be accepted. 
:)

Igneous Rocks
- Intrusive
- Extrusive
Sedimentary Rocks
- Compaction
- Cementation
- Fossils
Metamorphic Rocks
Superduperman12
1/4/2012

IGNEOUS ROCKS

Grammar- Your grammar looks good I do not see any mistakes.

Information- Your information is great you may want to add more in the intrusive and extrusive sections.

Capitals- When you say "igneous rock" you may want to capitilize "igneous".

Punctuation- I don't see any punctuation errors.

Spelling- I don't see any spelling errors either.

Media- Great pictures they describe the information well. Good job on having videos.

SEDIMENTARY ROCKS

Grammar- I do not see any grammar errors.

Information- Great information. I think you may want to add information in the Compaction and Cementation sections.

Capitals- I do not see any capitilization errors.

Punctuation- No punctuation errors.

Spelling- When you said "orgasms" I think you ment organisims.

Media- Great pictures. Also good job on having videos.

METAMORPHIC ROCKS

Grammar- No grammar mistakes.

Information- Great information you may want to put "Foliated" and "Non Foliated" right together instead of having Slate, Schist and
Gneiss in between.

Capitals- No capitilization errors.

Punctuation- No punctuation errors.

Spelling- No spelling errors.

Media- Good picture. Good job on having a video.

Great Job overall!!!

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Oreo
1/4/2012

Igneous intrusive
Spelling: You have a few spelling errors but not many of them, you've done a great job.
Grammer: you don't have any grammer mistakes.
Information: well I think your information was very good.
Capitals: you put capitals were you need them.
Igneous extrusive
Spelling: I didn't see any spelling errors, great job so far.
Grammer: you have one grammer mistake.
Information: I think that all of your information was great but you could use a bit more.
Sedimentary compaction
Spelling: you have a few spelling errors not many.
Information: your information was good could use some more.
Media: I like the picture you put same with video.
Capitals: you put the capitals were you needed them.
Sedementary cementation
Spelling: you have a few spelling errors not many.
Grammer: I read over your sentences and I did not see and grammer mistakes.
Media: I like the video you put.
Information: nice information but it could use more.
Sedemimantary fossils
Spelling: didnt see any spelling errors.
Grammer: You have one sentence that has a grammer mistake.
Information: nice information.
Media: The picture is good but the video looks the same as the cementaion video.
Metamorphic rock
Spelling: you have one spelling error.
Media: I like the picture and video.
Information: you could use some more but besides that your website is looking great. :)

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Joe Joltz
1/4/2012

What were the mistakes? That would help.
:)

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Amy
1/4/2012

Igneous Rock

Punctuation: I could not see one single punctuation mistake.
Information: I thought you had just the right amount of information
Capitals: I saw no capitals in the wrong place or did not notice any missing.
Media: Good work on the picture it was very relevant like the video.
Grammar: There were no grammar mistakes that I could tell.
Spelling: I saw no spelling errors on the page.

Sedimentary Rock

Punctuation : I saw no punctuation errors on this page..
Spelling: I could not see not see a spelling error which is great.
Media: I thought the picture was good and it was great that you added a video.
Capitals: I saw no capitals in the wrong place or missing so that is good.
Information: I think you have lots of information that it is very helpful to all of your viewers.
Grammar: There was not any grammar mistakes that I could see so good job.

Metamorphic Rock

Grammar: I did not see a grammar mistake which makes it easier to read.
Spelling: I could see not one spelling mistake as I was reading it.
Media: I liked your picture and I thought it was nice of you to add a video on how to identify them.
Punctuation: There where no punctuation mistakes that I could see as I read it.
Capitals: I saw no capitals missing or out of place in your writing.
Information: I thought you had a good amout of information.

Great job on your wonderful website and keep up the work that you do cause it is amazing.

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Goddess Athena
1/4/2012

Igneous rocks-
Grammar: I wasn't able to find any grammar errors which is great!
Spelling: There were no spelling errors which is great!
Capitals: I wasn't able to find any capital issues which is great!
Information: Your information was very detailed and had just the right amount of information.

Sedimentary Rocks-
Grammar: There were no grammar errors which is great!
Spelling: There were no spelling errors which is great!
Capitals: I wasn't able to find any capital issues which is great!
Information: Your information was very detailed and had just the right amount of information.

Metamorphic rocks:
Grammar: I wasn't able to find any grammar errors which is great!
Spelling: There were no spelling errors which is great!
Capitals: I wasn't able to find any capital issues which is great!
Information: Your information was very detailed. I liked how you talked about foliated and unfoliated metamorphic rocks!

Over all you did a great job!

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