This is my first reflection for this blog page!
Please post a comment/question that you have.  Let me know if there is anything I have to add to my Rock Cycle and Plate Tectonics pages.  Any positive feedback would be very much appreciated.
Cleopatra
12/12/2011 05:35:35 am

In your rock cycle section when you are listing three steps in the rock cycle you could probably move all of the information after the comma in step 1 to step 2 and it will make a little more sense. Also in number three you left out that other natural forces like people, animals, storms, etc. can move sediment. In transform boundary you forgot to include that if the plates are moving in the same direction they move in different speeds. Otherwise your "Rock Cycle" and "Plate Tectonics" pages are very well written.

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Oreo
12/12/2011 09:37:41 am

Your website is very well done but you have a few spelling errors (not many), you are not missing anything besides that your website is very good. :)

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Minnie Mouse
12/12/2011 09:58:12 am

i think that your website has a clean look to it and that there were a few mis spelled words but u did great and u missed out some stuff like cleo patra said animals storms and etc

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Goddess Athena
12/12/2011 10:28:42 am

Rock cycle:
- Your page is really organized and you gave some side notes which I really liked.
- You could include if the rock cycle can go the other way around.
- Over all you did an awesome job!

Plate Tectonics:
- For your plate tectonics page, I wasn't able to find any mistakes.
- You could have added more information from the internet.
- Over all you did an awesome job!

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Amy
12/12/2011 01:53:37 pm

Your website is great!!! You have great information on your rock cycle and the theory of plate tectonics. You have a nice and organized website. Great job and keep up the good work.

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Mr. Hong
12/13/2011 02:39:48 pm

@ Joe - Your website is looking great! Keep up the good work! Make sure you read all the comments/feedback and make the necessary edits or revisions.

@ Cleopatra and Athena - Great feedback! Keep up the good work!

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