Hi again!  Please look over my  Convergent Boundary section and tell me what I can fix or add.

Grammar
Punctuation
Spelling
Missing Info
etc.
Oreo
1/3/2012 13:29:01

GRAMMER: In some sentences you have a grammer mistakes (not many).

SPELLING: You have some spelling mistakes not many tho this section is really well done so far.

CAPITALS: You put capitals were you need them.

MEDIA: Your pictures are very good, I like how it shows how it moves.

INFORMATION: Your information is great but you could add some more information but over all its good.

Over all its looking great :)

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Superduperman12
1/3/2012 15:17:28

Grammar-Your grammer is very good. I do not see any mistakes.

Information-Your information is very good. You may want to add more in the third and fourth paragraph.

Spelling-I do not see any spelling errors

Capitals-There are no capitilization errors

Good Job!!!

Media-Great pictures they are describing your information very well. You may want to add a video

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Superduperman12
1/3/2012 15:18:33

Grammar-Your grammer is very good. I do not see any mistakes.

Information-Your information is very good. You may want to add more in the third and fourth paragraph.

Spelling-I do not see any spelling errors

Capitals-There are no capitilization errors

Media-Great pictures they are describing your information very well. You may want to add a video

Good Job!!!

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Amy
1/3/2012 19:15:15

Your website is so organized

Grammar: There is no grammar mistakes which is a great sign well atleast not that I could see.

Spelling: I could see no spelling mistakes on that pge so that is great.

Media: I thought the pictures was very good the pictures where very relevet so keep up the great work.

Punctuation: I saw no punctuation mistakes in your work so keep up the awesome work.

Capital: I saw no capitals missing or in the wrong place so that is wonderful.

Information: I thought you had great information that was very organized but you could add more information for the last two paragraphs.

Great job

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Joe Joltz
1/3/2012 19:38:14

What information could I add???
Thanks for the great feedback!
:)

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